Nov. 7 Experimental Form
Experimental FormIn the presence of mirrorsI practice becomingan indirect object look beyond the reflectionto the inner other after all there are more terrifyingpossibilities...
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I liked the slithery feel of this, Toni. I almost wrote the "slithey toves." Someone should write a social history of mirrors, prefaced by this poem
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nice meaty (rhyme in the) end couplet- slithey toves- it suits!
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Very thought-provoking, Toni. I still need to think more on it. Excellent repetition of p's, s's, and r's. Like the "inner other" too.
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Ha! You got me with the first three lines. I like the selectively attentive too. Reminds me of people talking to their cell phones.
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"the skillful sidling of the selectively attentive subtle mastery of the sidelong glimpse, the passing glance, a brief reprieve of negative space foretaste of plain truth in a stranger’s face." wow...
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